What I hate so far:
* There is not much internal narration. Heck, I'd go and say there isn't any really. The chapters are so short, we never really get to know Tony. Meh. Some of them are less than 2 pages long... T_T Would make a fast read I guess.
* The hero keeps on losing his ability to speak whenever he sees Reya. I feel like cutting his tongue for him already. Doing you a favor, buddy.